You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter:
explain why you changed jobsdescribe your new jobtell him/her your other news
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own addresses.
Dear Ellen,
I hope you are great and enjoying your life, Remember I was seeking a job for the taxation department as I was quite depressed and unsatisfied with the working manner of my job in Auditing field. Although I had numerous experiences, it became difficult to travel miles regularly for audit at different locations.
I had an interview last week in one of the Big fours and my dream place of work i.e Deloitte and I selected as a senior tax consultant with well-paid package and valuable amenities. Besides this, exposures and new challenges, I am experiencing put my efforts into desired corporate life hands down.
You would be delighted to know, my cousin Ranbeer joined me this week for homestay and also seeking a job, I suggested your company as the proposed vacancy suits his profile most. If you are not busy, we can make a plan for night out on this Sunday and will have great fun together.
I am looking forward to see you soon.
Thanks
Kitty
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| 2019-12-23 | Prachi Agrawal | 81 | view |
| 2019-10-11 | kpkddb | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...at fun together. I am looking forward to see you soon. Thanks Kitty
^^^^^^
Line 15, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ooking forward to see you soon. Thanks Kitty
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74269005848 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64128165807 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.719298245614 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1301581451 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.857142857 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150227518719 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557192439737 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385869423809 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086842408251 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283558025763 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.