You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter:
explain why you changed jobs
describe your new job
tell him/her your other news
Dear Sam,
I hope you are doing well. It's been a long since we write to each other. I have some great news to share with you! Yes, I have finally switched my job. As you know, I have been thinking about job switch since 2018 as there was not much career progress in being an early educator. Thus, I have decided to study a part-time course in Computer Science before change job.
Last week, I joined as a Software Application Developer in one of the prominent companies in Singapore. So for this job is quite interesting as it is entirely different from my previous role. This job not only satisfying to me but also remunerative.
Also, I want to let you know that I have relocated to East Singapore. This is because to reduce my commute time to work. Since my new workplace is located in the East, it was difficult to travel every day from my previous apartment. Indeed, my new apartment has plenty of facilities like gym, swimming pool, and a tennis court.
Take care.
Best Regards,
Karthi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, I hope you are doing well. Its been a lo...
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Suggestion: I've
...en a long since we write to each other. Ive some great news to share with you! Yes,...
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Suggestion: I've
...some great news to share with you! Yes, Ive finally switched my job. As you know, I...
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Suggestion: I've
...e finally switched my job. As you know, Ive been thinking about job switch since 20...
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Suggestion: I've
...gress in being an early educator. Thus, Ive decided to study a part-time course in ...
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Suggestion: I've
... Also, I want to let you know that Ive relocated to East Singapore. This is be...
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Line 21, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t. Take care. Best Regards, Karthi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, thus, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73295454545 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49301063264 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.710227272727 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4201530923 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0769230769 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5384615385 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0963355054438 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304383179843 0.0766984524023 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260416713463 0.0603063233224 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0581679879426 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416290012003 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.