You went on a trip and found that the guide was really helpful. Write a letter to the tour company manager.
In your letter, you should:
• describe the tour
• tell what you liked about the tour guide
• recommend manager ways/methods to appreciate the tour guide
Dear Sir,
My name is Maria Kapadia, and I was part of the group tour to India organized by your travel company last month. I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the amazing tour experience and helpful tour guide Mr. Bhatt. At first my family and I, were hesitant to book your company’s tour package, but I am happy that we didn’t change our decision. The tour itinerary was designed perfectly and we got to visit the most prominent well known cities of India like Mumbai, Delhi, Bangalore, Rajasthan and Chennai. We also visited interiors of Rajasthan where we camped for one night and experienced jungle safari which was one of the wildest experience.
Besides the amazing tour, I would also like to share that the tour guide Mr. Bhatt was one of the most helpful and knowledgeable guide. He was prompt, approachable and ensured that all people in the group were comfortable. My grandmother was unable to walk in the interiors of Rajasthan, so Mr Bhatt proactively arranged for wheelchair for her ease. It was a nice gesture, and my family will always remember it.
In today’s age, hardworking, proactive employees should be retained and rewarded. I am writing to suggest that your company can reward Mr. Bhatt by offering one-time special incentive or award him “Employee of the Month” certificate or trophy. Such gestures from your company’s end will motivate him to give his best performance and walk extra mile if required.
I hope my suggestions will be considered by your company. I look forward hearing from you.
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| 2019-12-24 | Rahmathun Kamila | 81 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the tour guide Mr. Bhatt was one of the most helpful and knowledgeable guide. He...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89495725632 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61216730038 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2935057209 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9285714286 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237403349382 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810990543329 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784633626027 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126841771301 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681381201032 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.