At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages.
A rise in population is an ever resolving issue which almost every country face. Despite the measures taken the growth in the numbers is uncomfortable. Now a days the ratio between youth and old people is so big.
There's a saying "young hold the cord" which means young are capable to carry out many burdens of the society on their shoulders for improvement. Youth have that strength to work on financial, academical, industrial fields to elevate the country's economy. Nations that possess more young people is more likely to spend its budget on health care as most of the youth have less complications compared to elder people.
On the other hand, less number of old people comprises the less percentage of experience in various fields which acts as a foundation for young to work on it and promote to next level. Without their guidance, it would take longer than normal for younger to make through any situation they face. With less number of older people the ethical development of nation will be hanging vulnerable as they face many challenging situations in life whose life lessons can pass down to the youth. Apart from these, it will be harder for the government to give Employment to every youth in the country and when they fail to do so the country will end up in chaos .
In my opinion, disadvantages out weigh the advantages in almost every field especially financial and ethical aspects, pillars the country has to stand on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, apart from, as to, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89516129032 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62468772648 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608870967742 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2786070391 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.363636364 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162550134044 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560794763484 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289528559324 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086610631228 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261781947452 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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