At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
With the development of states, there are more and more countries with a high proportion of young people, while comparatively a little proportion of the elderly. In my opinion, I believe this kind of population structure is not beneficial to one state.
Though there is no doubt that a population structure with a high proportion of youngsters may reflect an upcoming prosperous future and an overwhelming demand for purchase, which may boost the economy of a country. However, the low proportion of elders means a high death rate in a state may happen. In other words, this may reveal that the country is not safe enough to enable the elderly to live in longevity. There is a high possibility that the country may suffer from a disastrous war or serious epidemic disease.
Countries including Africa and India have this kind of similar population structure compared to longevous countries mostly in Europe. The sufficient labour force in these countries usually results from the failure of practicing birth control, which may contribute to the impoverishment of a family since they cannot afford to raise up a child. In the long run, the country may fall into a vicious cycle: the poor get more even poorer, which is fatal to the futuristic development. The issue should not be overlooked, and I believe it is the government should take the responsibility to implement related laws to support the society.
With the provided reason, I insist that a country with relatively large amount of young people than elders has tremendous drawbacks rather than advantages. Solutions should be set up in order to alter this tragic circumstance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt related laws to support the society. With the provided reason, I insist that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, may, so, while, kind of, no doubt, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07749077491 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91190910017 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568265682657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0851448903 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180074278938 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654546285652 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572457596952 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119357948497 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420369757485 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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