You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news.Write to your friend. In the letter:• Describe the house.• Describe the neighbourhood.• Invite your friend to come and see the house.You do not need to write

Dear Mia,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to tell you about my new home that I moved in the last week. As you know, it is an old-fashioned house with one bedroom, toilets, a kitchen and a small garden at the backside. However, this placed has just renovated and inside of the house is completely new especially, the kitchen area has a walk-in storage and the latest oven. I am enjoying making food every day so far even though I am bad at cooking.

Moreover, the neighborhood seems friendly and supportive as well. On the first day that I came to this house, Daisy who lives next door invited me afternoon tea and could a good relationship with her. We were actually talking about you and I think she would be a good friend with you.

I would like you to come and visit my place so that I can introduce my new home and possibly my neighbors to you. Please let me know if you are happy with this plan and when you are free. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,
Kate

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, i think, talking about, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29381443299 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34098379378 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634020618557 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7413529464 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4166666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 4.34317383033 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24227693817 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860251325634 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640174882643 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166087410501 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366635948787 0.0580467560999 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.