It is always debatable in developing countries that do local universities are good or foreign universities are good. In my opinion, every country has some good world-class universities so brilliant students need not to run after foreign universities. In my opinion travel to study is overrated or overhyped. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss this in detail.
First of all, let's discuss why people are running behind foreign universities. One of the main reason why people go abroad for the study is that in future the wants to settle there forever as after study in a country it becomes very easy to get citizenship of that country. Another reason is that due to the facilities available over there are better as compare to local universities. For example, nowadays students prefer to go to Australia for higher studies because Australia needs good manpower and after completing their study they get PR of Australia easily.
On the other hand, this is also true that a brilliant student will shine at every place so it does not matter if he or she studies locally or abroad. For example, the Indian Institute of Technology produces some of the brilliant minds of technologies world like Sunder Pachai (CEO of Google), Satya Nadella (CEO of Microsoft).
To conclude, I can say that it is true that universities play an important role in producing brilliant scholars. But travel to study is overrated and people not only go abroad for study but also to settle down permanently over there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, first of all, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96031746032 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81018510736 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551587301587 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1196655316 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.166666667 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.25397266985 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278598063383 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992960846433 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104341651564 0.071462118173 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170263058589 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540128242679 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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