You work at a home and you have problem with the equipment you use for your job

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You work at a home and you have problem with the equipment you use for your job

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I'm writing this in regards to the problem I am facing by using the wifi router provided by your company. The router with model number AH6547H is not functional and gives various problems while using the internet provided by it.

The WIFI router I am using toggles between on/off almost all time. It also provides very low internet speed. I have raised a complaint for repairing. However, it is not showing any improvement after it was repaired by your company assistant.

Subsequently, this causes various trouble for my work as I'm working remotely from my home. The slow speed of internet has decreased my efficiency to much extent. Also, I'm not able to connect with my colleagues due to this internet issue and it is immensely affecting my work since I'm not able to complete my work in time.

I would like to return this router to your company and would like to request a refund for the same.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon

Yours sincerely,

SS

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'm
Dear Sir/ Madam, Im writing this in regards to the problem ...
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Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir/ Madam, Im writing this in regards to the problem I am facing by using the wi...
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Suggestion: I'm
...s causes various trouble for my work as Im working remotely from my home. The slow...
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Line 9, column 147, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...of internet has decreased my efficiency to much extent. Also, Im not able to conne...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...sed my efficiency to much extent. Also, Im not able to connect with my colleagues ...
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...it is immensely affecting my work since Im not able to complete my work in time. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79651162791 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47739919278 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0793669195 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219304221077 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073488351774 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532917912719 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105961720068 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370991083904 0.0580467560999 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.