You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use
for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter
• describe the problem with the equipment
• explain how this problem is affecting your work
• say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to show my disappointment regarding the sewing machine that I have bought from your "Stita Store" located at Vastrapur area.
When I brought the stitching machine to my house it was in a really good condition but the moment I have started using it, the needle of the machine fall apart. Evenmore, the motor of the machine is not working properly which leaves uneven stitches on the clothes. Further more, the stitches are not strong enough. For instance, i have jused sewed a dress and the tme tried to put that on, all the stictes open up.
I am very upset to inform that, due to that equipment my workload has not only increased but also my various orders were cancelled. Evenmore, I have recieved alot of complaints and have also lost my old clients. So, it is my humble request toward you to either replace my recent machine with the better on or provide me with the full refund along with the compensation for the loss I have faced due to the machine.
Your sincere
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to show my disa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, regarding, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62295081967 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.482197957 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650273224044 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5364618694 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1804724401 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703359907311 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548377804905 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105273215325 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374881418159 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.