The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'experienced the highest'.
Suggestion: experienced the highest
...s vividly seen that, handheld games had experienced highest spread all over the world in the all ye...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...st spread all over the world in the all years given, whereas the mobile games was not...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eople, while in 2002, it used under just billions and last four years were inclin...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'inclined'.
Suggestion: inclined
...just billions and last four years were incline. Moving further, in the first period...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...more popular for global sales at exactly billions, whilist after six years were f...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., in 2002, online games was not sales in ,whereas after all the year increase dram...
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Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$6'.
Suggestion: $6
...tically and the last year sales near to $ 6.5 billions of dollars. Overall, acco...
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Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 billion'.
Suggestion: 5 billion
...lly and the last year sales near to $ 6.5 billions of dollars. Overall, according to figur...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$18'.
Suggestion: $18
... over the world and peaked at last year $ 18 billions of dollars, whereas least glob...
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Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '18 billion'.
Suggestion: 18 billion
...ver the world and peaked at last year $ 18 billions of dollars, whereas least global sales onl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, so, whereas, while, after all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87974683544 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24233938945 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.5733948426 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.2 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 5.23603664747 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241580799928 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162556917102 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106784078509 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183548513305 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111430858444 0.0819641961636 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.