Some people believe that visiters to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome culture differences. Discuss both there views and give your own opinion.
There have been ongoing debates whether outsiders adopt local customs and behavior or not. Some masses think that outsider to other countries should adopt traditional customs as well as behavior whereas few people believe that the host country should welcome other kind of culture. While this approch can be proved different kind of customs and behavior gives knowledge about their culture. I will discuss both view in the subsequent paragraphs.
Discussing the first view, the foremost the outsider do not disturb their traditional culture it they follow their core culture because local masses can not copy their customs. Secondly, visiters are enjoying their lifestyle and dress up their customs and clicking the pictures with it. For instance, some areas make stringent law for foreigners to follow their traditional dress and they do not use their own customs.
On the flip side, the supporters of the letter view favours various types of culture plays a paramount role for every country because it provide a lot of information about the different kind of culture. Moreover, some local masses adopt their customs as well as behavior and enjoy their lifestyle . Additionally, some masses spending a lot of money on these type of things. Furthermore, traveled feels much comfortable in own customs as well as behavior.
To conclude and give my opinion, I would certainly vote for the second opinion. The reason is that although some areas respect various types of culture whereas visiters do not ignore local behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28163265306 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52908587541 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555102040816 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8961984922 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5384615385 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349770555418 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116863610818 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109047307385 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206821470226 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121933489367 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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