Some people prefer to read paper books. While others prefer to read eBooks.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that these days, reading is becoming increasingly important in people's daily life. Some people enjoy reading paper books. While others prefer to read eBooks. In this essay I will discuss both sides and provide my overall opinion.
Generally speaking, people who prefer to read paper books think that paper books have a special taste when they read them. Furthermore, paper books make people comfortable and relax. Also, you can turn over papers easily and take notes simply by underline or circle sentences you liked. For example, the latest researches show that 70 per cent of people enjoy reading paper books rather than eBooks. Moreover, although paper books are sometime expensive, but still have their spell to attract people to them. You can also read for hours without hurt your eyes in contrast to read eBooks which may cause pain for your eyes.
On the other hand, vast majority of people prefer to read eBooks rather than paper books. They think that eBooks can be read in everywhere and any place, such as bus station while you are waiting for bus. In addition, eBooks are usually free, you can download them without pay money unlike paper books you cannot get them for free. For instance, who wants to spend money for paper books when he can get if for free from internet.
In conclusion, reading is a topic which raises strong passions on both sides of the argument. In my opinion, I enjoy reading paper books they make me relax and more comfortable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, such as, in contrast to, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82421875 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16534187701 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5859375 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9906667897 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.1875 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418582935229 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173415603784 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145049799197 0.0667982634062 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300297924158 0.151304729494 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15454271181 0.056905535591 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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