Some people prefer to work 5 days a week for shorter hours. Others prefer to work for 3 days a week for longer hours. Which do you prefer?
It goes without saying that jobs and carriers have a pivotal role in people’s life. Expending more than one-third of life on working shows its prominence utterly. So fundamental is the job that no one can tackle today’s hectic life without it. Some controversy is often brought up in this regard as to how much time people prefer to spend on working. While somebody prefer to work 5 days a week for shorter hours others prefer to work 3 days a week for longer hours. I personally prefer working 5 days a week for shorter hours. In the ensuing lines, I will investigate two outstanding reasons to shed light on this thesis.
One reason coming to mind at first is that I can do my duties better. I am a person getting tired easily, especially if I work for long hours. Rarely do I work for 12 hours but if I did, I would be totally exhausted. That is crystal clear being tired makes me unable to do my best and accomplish my duties and responsibilities. As a result, by working 5 days a week but for short hours not only can I boost my efficiency but also I increase my efficacy. The result of my performance is augmented noticeably by working 6 hours a day. Take the example of my last experience as a simulation laboratory assistant. At the beginning of the semester I worked from 8:00 A.M. to 8:00 P.M. By the time I finished the simulation, I had not had enough energy to submit it so the key part was uncompleted which was inauspicious. After a while, I rescheduled it from 8:00 A.M. to 2:00 P.M., by which I decently held all my responsibilities.
Another point which deserves some words is that this way gives me a better feeling about myself. wanting to be involved all days with my job, I feel I am valuable and beneficial. In this way, I genuinely become overjoyed which means I have a better feeling about myself. Should one day I don’t associate with my carrier, I feel I am useless. Some people may say if you work 3 days a week but for longer hours, you will have adequate time to do something joyful, good examples of which are traveling, attending fun classes, and spending more time with friends, but I believe the given activities cannot outweigh the joy of being involved with my job. According to a study conducted by Tehran institute of job’s related issues, one reason that people want to be obsessed with their job is getting better feeling about their abilities and then themselves. Should this group work less than 4 days a week, they will become depressed. This proved that for someone like me it is better to work 5 days a week in order to gain better feelings.
As a conclusion, although some people prefer to work 3 days a week for longer hours, I prefer to work 5 days a week but for shorter hours. Otherwise, I cannot do my duties properly and I will not have a good feeling about myself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 377, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'prefers'.
Suggestion: prefers
...fer to spend on working. While somebody prefer to work 5 days a week for shorter hours...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Wanting
...gives me a better feeling about myself. wanting to be involved all days with my job, I ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, third, while, as to, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2328.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 519.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48554913295 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72539521485 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472061657033 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3597952721 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5384615385 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9615384615 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.96153846154 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.514004374156 0.236089414692 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160688837096 0.076458572812 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.235554078265 0.0737576698707 319% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.406305121064 0.150856017488 269% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.192373998707 0.0645574589148 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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