The diagram illustrates how to recycle wasted glass bottles.
Overall, three main stages are involved in the process, beginning with the collection of wasted glass bottles and ending with new bottles ready for sale in the stores.
The process starts when wasted glass bottles are collected from various sources and transferred to a place called collection point. These bottles are then transported to the next location to be further processed. At stage two, the bottles are sprayed with high-pressure water to remove any impurities before being separated by colors, namely brown, green and clear. After being delivered to the glass processing facilities, these bottles are crushed into small pieces and burned in a furnace at a high temperature, ranging from 600 to 800 degrees Celsius to create recycled glass liquid. This resulting glass liquid, along with the new liquid glass, is poured into a mold to create bottle shapes, and new bottles are produced. These bottles are used to store liquid such as soft drinks and are eventually on display for sale in supermarkets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... bottles ready for sale in the stores. The process starts when wasted glass bot...
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...ly on display for sale in supermarkets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20114942529 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57620671962 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626436781609 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1551627608 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.125 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131471836329 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719141085048 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725740195652 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138622211651 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624099834373 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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