Advertising is a tool which attract the customer to buy more and more goods. Discuss its pros and cons along with example.
Without any doubt, in the current epoch ads are very popular among the masses. In by gone era this trend had been disappear and companies employers went at door to door for selling their product. In this easy, I will discuss both merits and demerits of adverts before reaching the reasonable conclusion. In my opinion advantages are overweight the disadvantages.
There are myriad of reason why the advertising attract the buyer. The first and foremost is, today ad is the best way to promote the product. To exemplify it, in modern world majority of the people like to using the electronic gadgets. such as mobile phones, laptops, computer and TV etc. As a consequence, adds depicts on this gadgets and product get name and fame or the sale of good's high in proportion. furthermore, the ad is better strategy for both retailer and consumer. For example, firm represent their latest goods. On the other hand buyer know about latest goods.
Yet another viewpoint to substantiate mu stance is that , the most of the advertisements is related to their tradition and culture of every nation. It lead to know about other country living lifestyle, food and clothing etc.
On the down side, the advertising has few drawback. Firstly, some add are fake and cease the money from masses. To paradigm, the trend of doing online shopping is upsurge at the fast pace. we can only seen the product photo and pay amount with debit card and sometime it is fake or stealing the money
To recapitulate, although, advertising has some pros, its drawback cannot be overlooked . I personally opine that in this modern era add play vital role and necessary for everyone. However, it is our duty to buy goods from legal approved site by regime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, so, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89830508475 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6401514816 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647457627119 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3041773179 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.25 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111287757817 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283341310369 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374402208869 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052520317636 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031883032342 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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