Job selection plays a significant role in the individual’s life for its wide influence on your financial condition, social communication, work activity and so on. Generally, there are two options lied ahead: taking the secure job or waiting for a better one. It is not uncommon that the majority invariably overlook opportunities which they can effortlessly take, but pay immense attention to so-called mirage. Great chances are that these risk-takers are in vain in the end. Apparently, the above is more sensible and feasible.
Indeed, chasing for the more satisfying job, if successes, would benefit you in terms of comfortable office environment, high-level wages and friendly colleagues. As an old saying goes, the desire to look attractive is universal. As is common sense, high rewards accompany potential huge amounts of risk which are heavily underestimated or neglected. What if you fail to get the job? What if the job is totally different from which you imagine? Moreover, without a secure job, you are hardly in full preparation for the more satisfying one.
A secure employment would provide you with stable financial resource which could improve your happiness. Working income, with on doubt, is the main security for a family. However, once you give up the possible job opportunities to wait for a more satisfying one, you not only put yourself at high risk but also involve your family members in to share the risk. To address this issue, a steady work should always be given the priority. Waiting, sometimes is wasting time and is harmful for your mental and physical health at the same time. Endless anxiety and stress in the period of waiting for a better job opportunity would cause damage to your body. Moreover, the negative feelings may convey to your friends and family members as well, which adds the unnecessary burden to them.
In addition, taking a stable work opportunity is the first stage to step into the target of obtaining a more satisfying job in the future. Selecting a secure job is an effective method to get rid of potential risk, on the other hand, is also a pathway to increase the possibility of earning a satisfying job. By learning and practicing in your current secure job, you will accumulate abundant experience, which lay a solid foundation for getting a better one.
To sum up, based on the secure job's advantages mentioned above, I firmly draw the conclusion that taking the secure job is better than waiting for a more satisfying one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02403846154 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83769533123 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4787069495 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22727272727 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342129162496 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104349382793 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672188131395 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211405417171 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278933874349 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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