The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates did their degree, and employer's reasons for hiring them.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You should write at least 150 words.
Writing task 1
The pie chats enumerate the comparative data about the percentage of the MBA students who have purpose of pursuing MBA study and other chart depict that the there are several causes of the offering the job to them
As an overall assessment, it is explicitly observed that job opportunities are the highest purpose of studying of MBA students while personality and previous experience are most suitable reason for hiring. which have shown the staggering figure.
In the preliminary stages, almost one in third ratio of students doing MBA for job opportunities while personal development and ability to do job better are almost same percentage which was nearly 15%. Astoundingly, almost one in ten learners who are doing MBA for surge their ability to help other which has shown stark contrast between other reason for pursuing MBA. Presentation and previous experience (connections) are second important for job offering which was two in fifth. Surprisingly, the ratio of qualification is the least reason for hiring employees in the company.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-01 | ajendrapatel | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...l causes of the offering the job to them As an overall assessment, it is explicit...
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...ce are most suitable reason for hiring. which have shown the staggering figure. In ...
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...ich was nearly 15%. Astoundingly, almost one in ten learners who are doing MBA fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2874251497 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86653154867 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556886227545 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.522755618 43.030603864 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.166666667 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124829759551 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623816432063 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442284190878 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08654328274 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022033939424 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.