You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working.
In your letter
1. Describe the work you have been doing
2. Explain why you can no longer do this work
3. Recommend another person who is interested in the work
Write at least 150 words
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform about discontinuing voluntary work as my family would be shifting to a new place in next two months.
I was teaching computer science in primary section since two years, where I enjoyed the most happiest moment of life. The children have learned a lot by preparing projects, assignments and showing their creativity in computer skills. I am sure to miss this time I had with them.
Honestly, I do not want to quit the job, but my husband got promoted and so he is appointed to take responsibility in Mumbai; thereby, I am accompnying him at this new place. I have learned a lot from the school and all the teachers have inspired me a lot. I thank everyone for all the motivation and help they offered me while in school.
Moreover, I have my friend, ana, who is willing to teach the subject in my place. she has similar qualification and have experience as a qualified teacher, thereby, I would recommend her for the job.
Hereby, I am enclosing ana's resume for your further reference. I hope she would prove a good teacher; children would be glad to have her as a mentor.
Your's sincerely,
Jane Mathew
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 89, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'happiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: happiest
...on since two years, where I enjoyed the most happiest moment of life. The children have learn...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 89, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the happiest'.
Suggestion: most the happiest
...on since two years, where I enjoyed the most happiest moment of life. The children have learn...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...lling to teach the subject in my place. she has similar qualification and have expe...
^^^
Line 19, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... I hope she would prove a good teacher; children would be glad to have her as a ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69268292683 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75077837667 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643902439024 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7415761453 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1666666667 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137012534869 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04777599665 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227903475975 0.0603063233224 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06835531529 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.012012429048 0.0580467560999 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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