In this age of technological advancements, people’s lives have become much easier in every aspect than it was before. Nowadays, people cannot imagine their lives without using the latest technology. Nowadays, investigation agencies use technologies massively to resolve crime and also become successful, unlike the old times when there were no necessary means to stop and resolve crimes. However, there is a large group of scholars, who think that various technologies may responsible for increasing the crime rate. This essay will evaluate both points and present a conclusion in the end.
Firstly, new technological inventions have proved themselves useful to resolve and prevent many crimes instantly. With the modern technologies available, it has become very easier to track down the criminals and prove them guilty in the eyes of law. As per research from Oxford University, many criminals including infamous serial killers weren't brought to justice in lack of proper evidence and were released even though police and court knew that there were guilty. Furthermore, some of them committed heinous crimes again and murdered many innocent people before they were captured red-handed. Since the inception of new technologies such as fingerprint analysis and DNA evaluation, escaping criminals isn’t possible anymore.
Next, the significance of technologies in modern lives cannot be denied but its contribution to expanding cyber crimes may also not be ignored. Nowadays, many hackers around the globe are involved in online fraud and piracy, which result in heavy financial casualties to the people. Apart from this, since the inception of guns and their availability to everyone also result in the untimely death of many innocents.
Lastly, technology should be used for the betterment of people. Even though some people misuse various technologies, it cannot be blamed to encourage crimes. The responsibility of using the available technology productively lies with the people and if it is not being done so, we are who should be at fault.
In essence, technologies have diminished the crime rate and without it, it is also impossible to resolve and check a crime at the rapid speed. While some people have started misusing it but its advantages still outweigh its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...inals including infamous serial killers werent brought to justice in lack of proper ev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, so, still, while, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1949.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4593837535 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90575171745 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585434173669 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2363157398 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.277777778 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216272286903 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675715088549 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476797666939 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118651237164 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456442669612 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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