In this era of technological advancements, taking photographs of various places and events has become easier than before. Some of these photographs are so meaningful that they provide an overall view of the story written in a news-paper or being presented in a program. Images are often used by various news-channels and papers to provide credibility to the news; however, they also provide an overall insight of the news instantly.
As they say, a picture is worth a thousand words and I find it entirely true. When an image is used to describe a story, it makes it more interesting and detailed. For instance, when an Indian news-channel ran the news about India’s moon mission and spaceship program, only a few people found it interesting. However, when ISRO started publishing the images of the moon taken by the spaceship on a social media application, it boosted people’s interest in the mission and they started to follow the developments very closely.
Photos and strong visuals are used by various platforms to demonstrate multiple issues such as war, human emotions, climate changes, and scientific discoveries, etc. These are often used to present the effects of a global crisis in an effective manner as well. A research conducted by ABC University showed that the human mind is more responsive to photographs and visuals rather than written words. Hence, it is proven that images can be used to convey a message to people more efficiently.
In essence, photographs or images become a vital part and have a significant impact when it comes to present something to the audience. They are often used to make the portrayal more interesting and illustrative. In my opinion, pictures should be used to describe news as they add more credibility to the news as well as leave an impact on people’s minds.
- Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? 56
- Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them while other scientists think that is a bad idea and it would be dangerous. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 67
- Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? 73
- These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- These days people in some countries are living in a “throw-away” society, which means people use things in a short time and then throw them away. Causes and problems. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'trues'?
Suggestion: trues
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Message: Consider replacing "in an effective manner" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... present the effects of a global crisis in an effective manner as well. A research conducted by ABC Un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05280528053 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98950153947 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531353135314 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8171842709 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21593745921 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748959228854 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440711178925 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127896291734 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00838311281951 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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