There are plans to build a new factory in parkland near where you live. Write a letter to the local council.
In your letter
give reasons why you are against the plans
explain why the parkland should stay
suggest what action the council should take
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with a hope that you will take stern action against the plan of building a chemical factory in the children's park which is just next lane from my house. This plan will have adverse effect on the local community as it is the only park in that area where children and elder people come for leisure activities. It also has several rare plant species which will be lost by the chemical waste.
This park has become a symbol of unity among the community and many of the residents have their fond memories of marriage in it. Besides that, many local festivities are held every year which gives a chance for locals to mingle with new people and it has become kind of a tradition now. As it has many rare plant species so many school visits are made for its sightseeing and if the chemical factory is constructed those visits will not be possible and school children will be deprived from their recreational activities.
It would be in the best interest of the community if local council plays an active part in convincing the factory owners about the merits and demerits of constructing the factory in the parkland and they should take legal action against the factory owners if they no solution is reached.
I look forward to your response on this matter.
Yours' faithfully
Umair Hassan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 263, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...ingle with new people and it has become kind of a tradition now. As it has many rare plan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35850289574 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572033898305 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.175424947 44.8134815571 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.555555556 76.5299724578 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2222222222 16.8248392259 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178349460348 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621964908506 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634018120711 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962170601764 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606149656078 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.