Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is considered by some that foreigner habitat of a country where they have to speak an official language of this country may deal with serious social problems as well as practical problems. On the flip side, others swear by that these problems are short-term and not serious at all. In my viewpoint, first statement is a bit counterintuitive idea and I totally agree with second idea. In the subsequent paragraphs, I articulate both ideas and their reasons.
To begin with, despit all benefits of migrating to other countries which its supports claim, there are many concerns connected with it. most of the people migrate to other countries do not know their culture, customs which can contribute to unintentional insulation. Also, it should be noted that there are many restriction for foreign people which must abide by them and convicting any crime result worsen fine than others. The best example for this is my cousin who apply abroad to other country for study many years ago and since then he has living there. He did not know about work permit for foreigner citizen and he worked there without it. consequently, the court convicted him to pay 1000$ as fine.
On the contrary, there are many people who were migrated to other countries and having better life quality. That is partly because they have studied about their destination, its history, rules, government, people, customs and etc. This allows them to gain access to large reservoirs of knowledge about the country they were choosen to migrate. With that in mind, they were well-informed about it and its language. Plus, learning its language help them to communicate better with local people of that country and eliminate many problems to face with.
To narrow it down, as I mentioned before people are split on this. It gives me the sense that this debating led not to anywhere fruitful. As far as I concerned lack of knowledge about other country where people choose to live there must be the cause of problems. So, people tend to migrate must be aware about every arena of migration and its requirement in other countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 693, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1000'.
Suggestion: $1000
...quently, the court convicted him to pay 1000$ as fine. On the contrary, there are m...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ory, rules, government, people, customs and etc. This allows them to gain access to larg...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... debating led not to anywhere fruitful. As far as I concerned lack of knowledge ab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, second, so, then, well, as well as, in my view, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91011235955 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57503234285 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6262659505 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7368421053 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23510531513 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687212585159 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875835740399 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148767280411 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811567018171 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.