Some people think that a law should exist so that young people under 18 cannot be out after the midnight, others think it should not be. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is considered by some that youths should be prohibited to venture out post mid-night by implementing a strong law, while they are some who thinks that it is not necessary. However, in my opinion, I personally condemn the idea of introducing specific regulations against the energetic teenagers.
On the one hand, in the recent times, the number of people attending late night parties has rapidly doubled which in turn resulted in their overdose consumption of liquors and dreadful drugs. An apt illustration is, last week cops arrested a vocalist who was a national award winner for the sake of drunken drive on the way of his return from his success party. Secondly, police forces could not monitor every nook and corner of the streets which makes people secured life at risk at times. Though the advanced CCTV Surveillance and bio metric systems are installed everywhere in and around the corner of plethora of residential places, the crime rates occurring after the middle of the night has reduced. So, keeping mind in the above vital points, implementation of set of rules must be made mandatory in order to safeguard the public from strangers.
On the other hand, in the upward trend many of the individuals prefer to do combine study during mid night where they are sharing their cognitive skills with one another. In addition, in the modern civilization fresh and young minds should be freed up and they will be more sagacious if they are given opportunity to get rid of their cocoon and they will convert all the breakdown as breakthroughs. Therefore, law emerging should be in a way to encourage the talents to reach the greater heights rather than making them to fall into the disuse pit.
To conclude, I strongly reckon that today’s generation are our tomorrow’s country pride. Hence, restrictions must not be levied on the young people so that they will reach the pinnacle one day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95031055901 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7332580253 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649068322981 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.2031744746 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.833333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223002054372 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689731694547 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692823625222 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129546715112 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477967290023 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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