Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
To commence with, we are living in the technological world of 21st century. We almost using many of the science and technology investments in day today life, because our ancestor and our previous generations are spent money and time for the inventions, therefore we are utilizing all the benefits. We have to thankful for the previous generation. So, exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries. In the future this current world may be turned into people not living place. Hence, space exploration is not waste of money.
Currently living world is not created within a day or a month, it has taken millions of years to build the current world. In the daily life, we are spoiling the earth with many number of unwanted deeds. Global warming is the biggest thread in the daily challenging life, all the nature elements are spoiled by the human. So, we are making this world as human being not living place. Therefore, space exploration is much needed one for the future.
On the other side, we are facing numerous problem in the modern world. We also consider the immediate problems, though these daily problems will occur every time and everywhere. If we resolve the one problem, the next problem will arise immediately. We have to spent the money for the daily problem also. It is not the waste of money. At least it will extend the lifetime of the current earth.
To conclude, exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries. In the future this current world may be turned into people not living. Hence, space exploration is not waste of money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'many numbers'.
Suggestion: many numbers
...ly life, we are spoiling the earth with many number of unwanted deeds. Global warming is th...
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Line 9, column 300, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...o spent the money for the daily problem also. It is not the waste of money. At least...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, therefore, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90812720848 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53121456223 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480565371025 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6551724138 158% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7179014685 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.45 104.977214359 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.15 20.9669160288 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.25397266985 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28957783507 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115535987182 0.0925447433944 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143134778619 0.071462118173 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224958811689 0.151781067708 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160071916446 0.0609392437508 263% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.