Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.
Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Zoo's are the world where several animals are being caged which is an entrainment source for people. Animals are being caged not just for visitors to watch on but also to make certain arrangements for the extincit species to not to fade away. Protecting these species in an atmosphere where they can grow and feel free is the place which is mandate but not a cruel concept but the way of tackling with them can be re considered.
Be it zoo or a sanctuary natural habitats of these animals can never be replaced by artificial environment provided to them. Any day, animals like pandas are the species which are considered to be endangered species are being protected in artificial atmospheres these days. This artificial atmosphere includes all the trained staff which take care of these animals as there own child. But unfortunately we do not have this sort of treatment available for the animals who are not in national parks or sanctuaries they are been tamed to show up to the visitors for their entertainment.
It is irrational to say that being caged is great, as being in cage they are not able to give birth to their off springs properly nor they are adaptable to the circumstances or environment around them. Be it humans or animals caging is considered to be the most cruel and inhuman act one might thing of although at some point of time this is essential too with certain breeds of animals.
To sum up, considering caging animals only the best way to save the endangered species, giving them space and freedom like the environment given in sanctuaries can be way better for flora and fauna to grow and develop fast under the surveillance of trained team.So government should consider more of wild life parks to be made and not creating zoo's.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
...aff which take care of these animals as there own child. But unfortunately we do not have...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
... under the surveillance of trained team.So government should consider more of wild...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, sort of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75895765472 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65891038852 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534201954397 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.9396791279 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.1 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210464976118 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969249946691 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317067994712 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134731558207 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182687357423 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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