Dear Sam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I have landed safely in Milano. I really enjoyed the holidays i spent with you guys. This was one of the best holidays ever. I am writing to thank you and to request for a wallet that i left at your house.
Last week i had the best time of my life as i have never witnessed such a beautiful place and a vibrant culture before. Also the food you cooked for me was delicious. I already miss the flavor and taste!
When i reached Milano, i realized that my wallet was missing and instantly i remembered that i had left it at your house sitting atop of the piano. I was picking my staff and i forgot to pick it up while in a hurry.
Still there are some important item in the wallet, so i would request you to courier it to me as soon as possible. You can send it to my office address as i spend all of my time there.
Say hello to all,
Warm wishes,
Jack
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...u well. I have landed safely in Milano. I really enjoyed the holidays i spent wit...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n Milano. I really enjoyed the holidays i spent with you guys. This was one of th...
^
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nk you and to request for a wallet that i left at your house. Last week i had ...
^
Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...that i left at your house. Last week i had the best time of my life as i have ...
^
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ful place and a vibrant culture before. Also the food you cooked for me was deliciou...
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Line 7, column 6, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eady miss the flavor and taste! When i reached Milano, i realized that my wall...
^
Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...or and taste! When i reached Milano, i realized that my wallet was missing and...
^
Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hat my wallet was missing and instantly i remembered that i had left it at your h...
^
Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...missing and instantly i remembered that i had left it at your house sitting atop ...
^
Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...f the piano. I was picking my staff and i forgot to pick it up while in a hurry. ...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...rgot to pick it up while in a hurry. Still there are some important item in the wa...
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Line 9, column 32, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'items'?
Suggestion: items
...urry. Still there are some important item in the wallet, so i would request you t...
^^^^
Line 9, column 55, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e some important item in the wallet, so i would request you to courier it to me a...
^
Line 9, column 156, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...You can send it to my office address as i spend all of my time there. Say hell...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, still, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.08287292818 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15179007882 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596685082873 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5886708013 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.5833333333 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361678795876 0.216113520407 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121380380647 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109622335659 0.0603063233224 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206599774854 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123771870015 0.0580467560999 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.79 8.71597938144 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.