The graph illustrates the number of employees
EU born science and technology in the EU worked in the US in the year 1999.
From the information supplied, it is apparently that among the EU countries, the employees of British were the largest with 28,000 employees in the US in 1999, while in Germany there were 25,000 workers. Compared to the British and the Germans, employees who were born in France and Italy were 3000 and 4000, definitely. Other EU countries in total had lower staff than those of Britain and Germany, but more employees than those of Italy and France in the US .
Overall, the Eu countries. Britain, had the highest employment rate in the US in 1999, in contrast to France which had the lowest employment rates among four countries in the European Union.
- Central and governments make a frantic attempt to promote festivals to create a lot of revenue. Some people think this money should be invested in social programs for the poor.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
- The bar chart below shows the number of employees from the European Union in the United States (1999). 56
- The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- Central and local government make a frantic attempt to promote festivals to create a lot of revenue. Some people think this money should be invested in social programs for the poor. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 649.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 135.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80740740741 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57339285352 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 106.607317073 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525925925926 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 184.5 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0678585976 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.166666667 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152219027882 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696074555461 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483320465961 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103569665166 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466056700898 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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