Dear Sam,
First and foremost, thank you for allowing me to stay in your apartment for a couple of days. On the last day of my stay, i was busy cleaning up the home to make it look sparkling clean up on your arrival from your holiday.
However, while i was washing the dishes in the kitchen, your blue porcelain bowl, which you have purchased in London last year, slipped from my fingers and broke into large pieces.
I am mortified and my hands are still trembling while writing this letter, as i know, that lovely bowl was expensive and you treasured it so much. Please forgive my reckless behavior, i am extremely sorry for breaking your precious belonging.
I immediately spoke with a friend of mine who works as a sculptor. He assured me that the bowl can be fixed due to the breaking was in large pieces. He is an expert in his profession, that is why i am quite sure he will do an excellent job.
Do let me know your thoughts on the matter. Once again, i am truly sorry.
All the best,
Adam
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...our thoughts on the matter. Once again, i am truly sorry. All the best, Adam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41489361702 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3763204854 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648936170213 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3523804458 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4545454545 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333960085225 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098093926616 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702080010181 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160419657359 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655327984973 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.