The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in
each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first chart illustrates comparative data of the earning from a county export in different leagues in the year 2015 and 2016. While, another table represent the percentage varied in each categories I 2016 compared to 2016.
Overall,it is cleared that all the earning from export rises one year after 2015 except gems and jewelry, which, experienced slight decreased. The greatest earning come from petroleum product and engineered good,while largest percentage leap was from textiles and gems and jewelry.
As report to chart, the earning from the Petroleun product and engineered products was around $ 61 billion and $ 63 billion from year 2015 to 2016.thet experss 3% growth for petroleum product and 8.5% for engineered products.
In context to gems and jewelry it moderately fell down just above $41 billion from $43 billions with change of 5.18% in value. Beside that,agriculture product markedly rose to about $32 billons in 2016 from $31 in 2015.whereas, texillies was lowest in 2015 with around $24 billion but went up approximately $26 billion after one year with highest percentage in value that was 15.24%.
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant. 56
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- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 61
- The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by the level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make 78
- Some people belie that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinions? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rent leagues in the year 2015 and 2016. While, another table represent the percentage...
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Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...es I 2016 compared to 2016. Overall,it is cleared that all the earning from ex...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...om petroleum product and engineered good,while largest percentage leap was from textil...
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Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'while the largest'.
Suggestion: while the largest
...m petroleum product and engineered good,while largest percentage leap was from textiles and g...
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Line 9, column 4, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'report charting'.
Suggestion: report charting
...textiles and gems and jewelry. As report to chart, the earning from the Petroleun product...
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Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$61'.
Suggestion: $61
...duct and engineered products was around $ 61 billion and $ 63 billion from year 2015...
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Line 9, column 112, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$63'.
Suggestion: $63
...ed products was around $ 61 billion and $ 63 billion from year 2015 to 2016.thet exp...
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Line 13, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , agriculture
...th change of 5.18% in value. Beside that,agriculture product markedly rose to about 2 billon...
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Line 13, column 230, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n 2016 from 1 in 2015.whereas, texillies was lowest in 2015 with around 4 billion...
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Line 13, column 324, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
... approximately 6 billion after one year with highest percentage in value that was 15.24%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26815642458 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83017487234 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603351955307 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7268664817 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.714285714 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231648254768 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125947787507 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827388431785 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158322395056 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101607185556 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.