Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People in today's world have become too dependent on automobiles. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer."
In the modern decade and widespread technology in the world, one of the controversial and considerable issues is using a device such as automobiles for movement and transport of goods and individuals. Humankind tends to facilitate of their works and task with easy ways. Admittedly, one of the appreciable human inventions is the automobile that it is an essential thing in every family. I completely agree that today humans too dependent on automobiles for three reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, one of considering the issue is time-consuming for everyone in the hectic lifestyle. Automobile enables to easily and fast move goods and individual as soon as possible. In the past, transport is very harsh and long for passengers and good that consequently, it is not possible for everyone. in my person life I believe that the automobile can very useful to overcome my different tasks. if don’t use automobile instead of taking a walk, I definitely satisfy my task.
Secondly, the cost of transportation is very critical for trade, passengers. Automobile enable to decrease in fees of transport with a high-speed. For example, decreasing costs for businesses can strengthen the power of competition in the market. In recent decades, goods can transport from the rest of the world such as winks of eyes.
Last but not least, humankind tends to sophisticate in different aspects of technology. Demanding advancement is an inherent need for everyone that enables to meet the needs.
In conclude, the automobile is essential in the modern hectic lifestyle and nobody can deny the role of it in interior life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e to decrease in fees of transport with a high-speed. For example, decreasing costs for busi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 269.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14126394052 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09303509995 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553903345725 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1949515146 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4375 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0743501616438 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255498710475 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462490526634 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0369297787846 0.150856017488 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491652224512 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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