You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family.
Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter:
• Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner
• Explain why you have been so busy
• Arrange a time to visit
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Grandmother,
I hope you are doing well. I am really sorry to let you know that I couldn't come to see you.
My university classes has recently been started and I'm going very much busy with my studies as one of my teacher have assigned me a social project to distribute 100 blankets to poor people around the city as the weather is getting freeze. For this purpose my instructor has told me that I'll get good grades if I'll complete this before the next week. So that's why I'm occupied in this task along with my class mates.
However, the good news is that I'll be getting off from my university by next month and I've planned that this time I'd spent 1 full month in our town and I am hoping that mom and dad would surprise me on my birthday which is coming in mid of next month. I've bought a wheel chair for you since last time you told me that you want to replace you current wheel chair.
So I'm desperately waiting for the next month to come and meet with you and our whole family.
Keep in touch
Jeetender
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'm
...y classes has recently been started and Im going very much busy with my studies as...
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Suggestion: I'll
...has told me that Ill get good grades if Ill complete this before the next week. So ...
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Suggestion: that's
... complete this before the next week. So thats why Im occupied in this task along with...
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Suggestion: I'm
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Suggestion:
... this task along with my class mates. However, the good news is that Ill be ge...
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Suggestion: I've
...ff from my university by next month and Ive planned that this time Id spent 1 full ...
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...xt month and Ive planned that this time Id spent 1 full month in our town and I am...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, well, as to, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30102040816 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12198287661 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627551020408 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.03913872 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213634608243 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911092811181 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449770301906 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13240170276 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308417302533 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.