Though the proliferation usage of computer and smart phone have greatly improved office and study efficiency than the traditional way of writing work report or taking notes. As a time-honoured skill that have been inherited for hundreds of years, handwriting would continue to remain a great part in human civilization.
As all human inventions are experiencing the tendency of digitization, seems the way of generating text should not be an exception. Admittedly, academic improvement is fueled by the innovation of all kind of document-developing software such as office and latency, which significantly diminished misunderstanding of academic papers due to individualized handwriting and promoted worldwide transformation of knowledge since the digital material supports sharing and copying via the internet. Even with so many convenience, typing cannot replace handwriting due to the reasons shown following.
The modern way of communication would not render handwriting obsolete. As for those who disregard the importance of traditional way of recording events and believe the key-based typing could act as a good alternative for handwriting for the next generation, may be taken aback when a power failure occurs, as the modern technique we relied on for messages-sending and essay-developing could not serve anymore while the basic skilled we have learned since kindergarten continue act as powerful way to ensure catching up with work. Besides, handwriting, in many countries, are seen as a previous and elegant art form with many historical origin as well as profound knowledge attached to it. Abandoning it would definitely pose a formidable threaten to the already vulnerable minority civilization and decrease cultural diversity.
In conclusion, the old-fashion way of writing, critically, is inferior to its contemporary counterpart in many terms, while still deserves the future generation to inherit and utilize.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: CONTINUE_TO_REMAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'remain'.
Suggestion: remain
...or hundreds of years, handwriting would continue to remain a great part in human civilization. ...
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Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun convenience seems to be countable; consider using: 'many conveniences'.
Suggestion: many conveniences
... copying via the internet. Even with so many convenience, typing cannot replace handwriting due ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, so, still, well, while, as for, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72569444444 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47023380565 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642361111111 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.928020952 49.4020404114 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.9 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0338858484323 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0136020150277 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0175299358481 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0161638869679 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018507996068 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.55 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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