People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
different individual have different attitudes. The author states that the people behaviours are mostly influenced by their immediate surroundings rather than society as a whole. The given topic is highly contentious as differnt people have different opinions on the given topic. some people may support that people behaviour are largely determined by their immediate surroundings, but some people may stand completely against the given statement. I mostly agree with the given topic for the following resasons.
first of all, people first born in the family, where he/she get in contact to his/her parents. From the parents, child begain to leran basic things. when he/she grow older, acquiring more knowledge from their parents such as basic life lessons, how to respond to their relatives, how to respect their senior or how to love their junior. when people spend more time with their surroundings, they get more information about the immediate surroundings and their attitudes is largely dominated by their influence. For example, when a people spend time only with their parents then his attitudes are almost same with their parents in most of the cases.
Similarly, when an individual spend more times with the people of their immediate vicinity, he can get chance to learn both the positive and negative things and make his own perspectives towards the particular issues which largely determined his attitudes. For instance, a person who was born on a sports family and spend more time with the sports people, then he has usually a positive attitude towards sports.
however, certain behaviour of the peoples are largely shaped by the society in which he lives. For instance, people live in a magar (a lower caste in Nepal) have developed his attitudes towards marriage, which is different from the people who lived in other community. he participated in the different rituals in the society from which his behaviours are influenced. Every society has own norms, value system and one should follow the culture and tradition of the society where he lives. By engaging in the different social works and from the lessons of his seniors, his attitudes are determined. Although, some people behave significantly different from their society, however, most of the people behaviour are largely shaped by the society where they lives.
In a nutshell, some behaviour of the peoples are determined largely by the society such a culture, value, system, however, majority of the behaviour are largely influenced by the the immediate surroundings. Hence, the people attitudes towards a different situation are largely by their contemporary people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, similarly, so, then, for example, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2227.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 421.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28978622328 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68596196994 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432304038005 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 706.5 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4397511436 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.35 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.05 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260947246065 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915891459656 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573361306078 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154840087494 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156965084737 0.0667264976115 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.