The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram represents the mechanism by which geothermal energy is utilized to generate electricity.
Overall, the whole process is comprised of five steps. It begins with cold water on the ground surface and ends with production of electricity. How does this all happen? The below paragraphs explain.
Initially, the cold water is pumped down about 4.5 kilometers underground. It reaches the injection well, which directs the water to hot rocks known as geothermal zone. This heats up water, which arrives at the production well. From here, the hot water is pumped upwards to the condenser.
In condenser, the water turns into vapors. Next, the steam enters the turbine, which starts spinning. This movement of turbines is converted by the generators into electricity. In the end, the current is relayed to the power lines and grid stations. Production of electricity through this and many other techniques sustains modern life as we know it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: IS_COMPRISED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of' or 'is composed of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
...ectricity. Overall, the whole process is comprised of five steps. It begins with cold water o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26973684211 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73797262835 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644736842105 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3335398436 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.2142857143 112.824112599 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.8571428571 22.9334400587 47% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 5.23603664747 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0837358529226 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308619446621 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494251357322 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731079219448 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686585237772 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.1 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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