Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
To live in a particular place is his/her choice and the choice is depends upon the various situation. I prefer to live in big city for some reasons which I am going to elaborate in my essay.
Firstly, living in a big city is very easy for getting god job. There are many big companies in the big city which are providing job for many individuals. After my graduation I am in big company and getting satisfactory enumeration which is not easily obtained in small town. I don’t have any tension even though I leave current company as I can get new opportunity in other company. Too many company and too many opportunity off course entice the people from many area of country.
Secondly, We can get chance to learn many cultural and tradition value in big city as large cities have innumerous population from different cast, religion, tradition and regions. For example I never get chance to learn about Newari, Maithili, Far western culture in , my birth place, small city but now due to large circle of friends from these community in big city. I got to know about different festivals. We celebrate each other’s’ festivals and share many things which we know, i.e. Newari food, dress, Maithili language and Festivals, Western language to greet to each other. Opportunity to learn about different culture and language helped me very well when we were in Nepal tour last year.
Moreover, small city is also good to live a peaceful life but all facility of entertainment, education, e.tc, are not possible in small town. Big city have variety of large QFX for cinema, big market for shopping and many university for quality education. For example, in our country 50% of all national university are situated in capital city.
In my conclusion, living in big city is getting more chance of job and learning cultural and traditional value of different place, cast, culture, source of entertainment, education, market, etc. If anyone wants to enjoy the real joy of life, big city is the ultimate destination.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun company seems to be countable; consider using: 'many companies'.
Suggestion: many companies
...t new opportunity in other company. Too many company and too many opportunity off course ent...
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Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun opportunity seems to be countable; consider using: 'many opportunities'.
Suggestion: many opportunities
...other company. Too many company and too many opportunity off course entice the people from many ...
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Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun area seems to be countable; consider using: 'many areas'.
Suggestion: many areas
...unity off course entice the people from many area of country. Secondly, We can get cha...
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Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...Newari, Maithili, Far western culture in , my birth place, small city but now due ...
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Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun university seems to be countable; consider using: 'many universities'.
Suggestion: many universities
...for cinema, big market for shopping and many university for quality education. For example, in ...
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Line 9, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., big city is the ultimate destination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90670553936 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76088729359 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527696793003 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8365160387 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19836420842 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717998067886 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750742405033 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133613284797 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844232217873 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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