Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Other believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is commonly believed that, it is beneficial to spread as much knowledge as available in science discoveries, business activities and the academic researches. On the other hand, it is argued by some that some data is a significant and precious to be known to anyone. This essay agrees that information should be shared to all people widely. Also this essay will discuss both points of view.
On the one hand, many think that the information and new methods should be available for everyone, because all people are equal to receive the data and be educated. Also some people are interesting in a particular material or study field, but they cannot afford the cost of these studies and that leads them to choose another field that they do not like or interested to it. For instance, in some reports it mentioned that many graduated students are worked some in their field to collect some money for studying another field, therefore they will feel fulfillment.
On the other hand, sometimes it is been costly to discover or explore a unique experiment results or to achieve a successful business methods, as we should consider the testing cost, and how much might scientists pay for procedures and researches material to have an extraordinary achievements in a specific field.
Finally, in my opinion, books and articles or any educational materials should be accessed by everyone, therefore that can help anyone to know more about the field of study that he interested in. in addition to it will generate a new thinkers to add more creativity to the communities.
In conclusion, whether information in different fields should be shared or it will be confidential and should pay to get it. People should take a consideration to share the useful information as much as they can see it will be beneficial to their nations and world in general.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Suggestion: Also,
...al to receive the data and be educated. Also some people are interesting in a partic...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: BE_INTEREST_IN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interested'?
Suggestion: interested
...a and be educated. Also some people are interesting in a particular material or study field...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'method'?
Suggestion: method
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iness methods, as we should consider the testing cost, and how much might scienti...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'achievement'?
Suggestion: achievement
...rches material to have an extraordinary achievements in a specific field. Finally, in m...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thinker'?
Suggestion: thinker
.... in addition to it will generate a new thinkers to add more creativity to the communiti...
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Suggestion:
... to their nations and world in general.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97435897436 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84147043345 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522435897436 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8885976696 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.333333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25541548477 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099615792327 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570684455222 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138418962896 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102793164051 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.