It is true that with the advent of new technology human life has made convenient and comfortable. Now, it is predicts that self-driving cars will be brought in the near future according to the scientists. However, in my point of view, this approach will be given negative impacts. This essay will prove that how this prediction will give problems to masses in my subsequent paragraphs
To begin with, there are multifarious bad impacts of this development. Firstly, the system of self driving cars will be given birth to the unemployment which is the major problem in many countries all over the world. As many employees who work as a driver in a lot of companies. Let's use school buses. For example, there are many workers who are occupying for school to bringing and receiving the students from home in the buses. It is the source of earning for them. Due to this this reason this system people will face unemployment.
Although, it is a positive advancement according to the scientists but more and more crisis will be came by self-driving cars. Secondly, place can not be taken by Robert of human. As sometime somethings are heppened in the car such as break fail and so on than that time a robert can use the his brain as a human. I means say to that rebort can nat control the cars due to this reason accident will be expanded. Finally, for the production of this car require a lot of money which government have to give scientists. While it is not considered that it will bring positive results.
To conclude, although with the advancement of technology human life has be totally change as compared to past whilst human have to take good decision for any other new technology. So, I strongly believe that it is negative development according to the above mentioned paragraphs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i mean, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74679487179 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73419604115 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535256410256 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4958490995 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2777777778 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20964256514 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065920940551 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678662488194 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127083157971 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692883199745 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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