The government should sometimes infringe on people's freedom fro security or society.
TO what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is a common belief that the government cannot permeate to intrude people's information without allowance.
In my opinion, people's freedom should be sometimes known by the government to protect dwellers from danger and ensure that safety regulations are followed.
We can see that the intruding upon individual liberties are true with the purpose to prevent danger. Many people don't know the way to protect themself with many threats like terrorists so that State agencies have to be stopped it. Take an instance with social networks, some perverts post many violent contents or reactionaries photos. These are very harmful to children and teenagers. The government had checked and deleted them before we saw it.
Moreover, to make sure that safety regulations are followed, they need to know the person's rights because Some jobs can endanger people's lives. For example, cooking, the chefs have to sometimes check their health. This is so important because the food can be unsafe if they get ill.
In short, the infringement of people's freedom is necessary to prevent dangers and guarantee the rules are done. With these reasons imposing on individual freedom is sometimes necessary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... purpose to prevent danger. Many people dont know the way to protect themself with m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, for example, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27894736842 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64391319984 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652631578947 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4768079644 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5833333333 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181000724859 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627773873195 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478434619651 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108331999205 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512760384541 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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