Nowadays, families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this.
why is this happening?
Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?
These days, families have a lack of bonding in relationships as compared with the old days, and this situation is largely accepted by society. The busy schedule and exercise use of digital platforms are the core reasons for demonizing the closeness. In my opinion, I firmly believe, advantageous of this development is far outweigh the pitfalls.
One of the first reasons why families are no more closer is tough routine work on a diurnal basis. The nature of the jobs force people to work longer hours, thus eventually, they fail to spend quality time with blood relations. In Pakistan, for instance, bankers completely live a robotic life, as they never meet family members for the months. another point to consider is that the high usage of social media, such as Facebook Twitter and WhatsApp is also contributed to this trend. people are more keen on their online life than interacting with a family in their leisure time.
this trend has numerous benefits. The primary benefit is that everyone can pursue a career without minimum distractions and enhance the living standard. another positive aspect is that people become mature early and easily adopt decision making skill. Because the exposure of new avenues shapes their personality in a positive way. In other words, they become independent and seek opportunities to establish themselves. However, there is a drawback as well of this approach. The most pivotal factor is that they bereft from emotional security and support. consequently, it will become difficult to cope with the challenges of contemporary life. In addition, it will also rise a mental health issue.
In conclusion, the busy modern lifestyle and social media are causing families to become less close. Therefore, it is my genuine belief, this friend brings more social consequences for the people except for the few complications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, except for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30132450331 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74095591886 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629139072848 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.286523714 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.2631578947 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8947368421 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63157894737 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286779278288 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781042969664 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772000654293 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162606504466 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335233206107 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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