Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music, film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no public or government restrictions on what they do.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Visual and performing artists should be allowed to have free reign in producing their artwork or form, as they see fit, and the federal or state officials place no constraints or limitations on them. While I support artistic freedom, I do believe that some government"governmental intervention is necessary to ensure societal standards are being maintained. Without regulations, some art form could inappropriate to members of the public; such as children.
The creative thoughts of artists should not be stagnated that it affects the quality of their work. Therefore, they should have the rights to create products that truly represent their style choice and passion. there should be no limitations placed on the process of generating these pieces; but caution must be taken to control the medium in which they will be displayed. government"governmental agencies could aid in helping to set and enforce protocols that are deemed socially responsible. this could be in the practice of having warnings in place for what audience the materials are conducive to. Also, categorizing what are qualifiable to be in public viewing versus what should only be displayed in private, controlled settings.
children are very curious individuals and in today’s society they are exposed at an early age to symbols and graphics that should be reserved for more mature personnel. they should not be involuntarily exposed to media that portrays sensitive subjects or details. it is the accountability of parents, with the aid of elected officials to preserve the best interests of minors. Sanctioning the ways and means in which artworks are distributed to the masses is one way in which government may help to curb indecency and overexposure.
As expressed above, I do believe that artists should have the privilege to create whatever their minds lead them to. However, it may be detrimental to social responsibility if there are no checks and balances in place to curtail what artworks are being reasonably showcased to t correct demographics. this is of special importance to underaged children, who deserves protection by the state. this is why government should play limited roles in censoring the promotion of artists’ work.
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- Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music, film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no public or government restrictions on what they do.To what extent do you agree or disagree with 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38920454545 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4190184523 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7526110742 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.588235294 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41176470588 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381784731914 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115966855302 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689008348411 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228621498256 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580606313942 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.