You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.
Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:
• Introduce yourself.
• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.
• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter, Regarding my credit card statement which I received today. It shows all the expenses which I made last month however I am pretty much sure except 5 to 6 minor purchases all other major purchases are not being made by me. I am a student and earning part-time while studying, So I do not spend this much amount ever. I have my account in your bank for more than 3 years, Although I never spent more than
$1000 from this card.
If you could compare my last 6 months statements,you will find out that, I always shop only groceries from the card moreover i am not keen about electronics and gadgets. But in my current statement, It shows purchase of phone and camera, Which is definitely not mine. I am one hundred percent sure that, My data which is, Using by your bank has been compromised , So as my personal information.
Particular in this situation, I urge you to block my existing card as quickly as possible and send me a new card urgently. Besides that, I am also requesting your organization to maintain strong cyber security for our data.
Yours Faithfully,
Jessica Max.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 428, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... years, Although I never spent more than 000 from this card. If you could...
^^^^
Line 17, column 49, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , you
...ould compare my last 6 months statements,you will find out that, I always shop only ...
^^^^
Line 17, column 126, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...p only groceries from the card moreover i am not keen about electronics and gadge...
^
Line 17, column 362, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Using by your bank has been compromised , So as my personal information. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76354679803 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64100160272 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674876847291 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.1774791825 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216564388952 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782789930026 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508838648645 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135785891453 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292613131997 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.