some people think that robots are important for human’s future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The world of technologies is developing so fast as compare to past. Some latest technologies which developed by humans are so advanced like robots, They are reducing human intervene and could work independently as per instruction, However in our society some people think that robots are important for future development but some other think that robots might give negative impact.
On one hand, there are some technology freak individuals who are constantly trying to develop something new to enhance their career and upgrade the future. They believe that by inventing unique technology like robots,
Could help people to do their daily routine work and household chores, Moreover they allow to feed daily or weekly data in their programming so it also work as reminder. It is mostly useful for disable person or elderly folk who need more assistance to do their work.
On other hand, We have people who think that robots are not a bad invention but overuse of robots or technology can create negative impact on society. I am totally agree with these view because as they are multitasking and bilingual sometimes, They are snatching jobs of many people so rate of unemployment rise in the market. while they are working,hackers could also hack it and misuse your personal data and schedule. As all these and many other reasons I am supporting these kind of people.
There are so many countries in this world who developed advanced robots, Many of them are also adopting it in their surroundings like, In offices,Cafe,restaurants and so on but others are afraid yet to accepting them in daily life due to security and humanity concern. For example, Countries like China,Japan already started to using them in daily routine.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...egative impact on society. I am totally agree with these view because as they are mul...
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...se in the market. while they are working,hackers could also hack it and misuse your pers...
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... and many other reasons I am supporting these kind of people. There are so many...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12937062937 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90161761971 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559440559441 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.5125112191 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.363636364 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23688233565 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839382490828 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125660911526 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121033035604 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119785711874 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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