The pie chart illustrates the percentage of people who were arrested in a period of five years which was terminated in 1994. Meanwhile, the bar graph describes the percentage of individuals being arrested recently. It can be clearly seen in pie chart that more than 1 in 3 of males were arrested and to be exact it was 32%, while in females it was only 9%.
Looking closely to the bar graph, when it comes to public drinking females got the meridian of around 38%, while men was just over 30%, which was 31%.This was followed by an assault and other reasons to be in jail nearly reached 20% for females, with the former 18% for men and supersedes the latter with more than 1%. However, with being drunk while driving, breaching of orders and thieves got 27%, 18% and 16% for men, which it consistently reached the highest percentage. Lastly, it was followed by women with 14%, 12% and 13% on the same cases.
Overall, the lowest peak was achieved by no answer with below 5% for males and lower than 10% for females.
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more than 1 in 3 of males were arrested and to be exact it was 32%,
while men was just over 30%, which was 31%.
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