It has been observed nowadays, that people dole out less importance to art as they give it to science, technology and business. This essay will examine the cause of giving less value to art and solutions on how to draw people’s attention to it.
Two main causes are parents don’t let their children take art as a profession and there is also a lack of information about art and culture given to people in today’s world. Some parents still think that taking art as their career doesn’t have scope in future and this profession won’t stick for a longer period of time. For example, in India, every other child is forced to take engineering or medical as their stream irrespective of their choice. Also, people are not aware of the art and culture of the world. There is a lack of information. For instance, in an office environment, there is less number of workshops organized for art and culture of the world.
Some possible solutions to this problem are that more concentration about world’s culture and art should be given to students in schools and colleges as well. Disentangle management should be allotted in schools and colleges. Also, more awareness should be given to people and it can be done through campaign, advertisement, more participation in workshops, conference and this should also be taken to office environment.
To summarise, more information to people leads to curiosity and eagerness which may want to think about art because no knowledge is wasted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, still, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.056 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92027395975 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5236783088 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248500120437 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969951021786 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621453218611 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139408549641 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588584102809 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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