You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- thank your friend for the holiday
- explain that you left your wallet in their house
- give them instructions on how to send it back to you
Dear Laura
I hope this letter finds you well. Since I returned back from Sydney last week , I am still living in those joyful moments we spent together.
I am really grateful for the week full of pleasure and happiness. It broke the boring routine and brought back the zest and zeal in my life. Australia is a really beautiful country with remarkable landscape and lush fields. Its mixture of natural green life and modern infrastructure makes it mesmerizing. I really loved The Opera House and Food Street. Hiking in the Southern mountains was one of the most memorable adventures of my life. I am anxiously waiting for the pictures of the holiday.
Since my return we had guests over at our place and I just got time for unpacking today, while doing that, I discovered that my wallet was missing. I must have left it at your home. It is a brown leather wallet with my name imprinted on the bottom left corner. It contains my Work ID card as well as my ATM card along with some other things.
I desperately need it back since the office starts the next week. Kindly send it back to me. You can post it to me or send it via the DHL or TCS. My address is as follow; Flat 21B, Boulevard Residentia, 12 Lincoln Street, London. I shall be really thankful.
Please send the wallet back immediately and write to me as soon as you can. I am really looking forward to meet you at our class reunion next month.
Best wishes,
Sarah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
...ope this letter finds you well. Since I returned back from Sydney last week , I am still livi...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ce I returned back from Sydney last week , I am still living in those joyful momen...
^^
Line 13, column 309, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (ATM) must be used with a third-person verb: 'cards'.
Suggestion: cards
...tains my Work ID card as well as my ATM card along with some other things. I de...
^^^^
Line 17, column 161, Rule ID: AS_FOLLOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...nd it via the DHL or TCS. My address is as follow; Flat 21B, Boulevard Residentia, 12 Lin...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 105, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...as you can. I am really looking forward to meet you at our class reunion next month. ...
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Line 29, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...next month. Best wishes, Sarah
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, still, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55513307985 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40687135699 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634980988593 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.274969901 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.0476190476 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5238095238 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.47619047619 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196973329066 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517911813312 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665152660288 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101006356454 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462985862421 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.