There is no denying that, the world is flourishing day by day in rapid pace. Nowadays, people would prefer to work on it's own rather than working as a civil servant. Individuals are not interested in doing physical work they are more tend to do sedentary work. We will discuss possible changes in the subsequent paragraphs.
As the technology is thriving gradually and it is taking place of old fashioned working conditions. For instance, long ago people used to effort hard in the field of agriculture, for construction purposes as well as for other labor duties but, these days, human beings wants to work sitting at one place, they do not want to exhaust their self by doing physical work. However, today persons are more dependent on business or privet jobs or working as a self employed due to issue of payment, before they used to work under any governmental sector and they were paying less amount in compare to their manual work.
From my own point of view, there are plethora of causes by which everyone is diverting towards modern lifestyle of work. Firstly, there are many optional available in the marketing field, e.g, online all the services are available for food, shopping, cabs and in which people are paid enough amount. Secondly, education also is taught online so, tutor and student does not have to go anywhere and by sitting at home they pupil can learn. Lastly, people are growing their business online and they can advertise on social media.
In conclusion, future will be full of nano technology, on your fingertip you could do anything you want. It seems to me that, the change have been occurred has a positive sides for the welfare of mankind.
- Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information such as hobbies and interest and whether they are married or single Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful Others disagree Discuss both these views and 73
- Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past. Give the cause. 84
- Some people believe that children s leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience 73
- Some people believe the purpose of education is to prepare people to be useful members for society Others say that the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world s fuel resources To what extent do you agree or disagree 82
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, as for, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82352941176 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48481939277 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626297577855 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4510918242 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344087504276 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103509276957 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654520670299 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182151969917 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869191622641 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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