Dear sir or Madam,
I am writing this to inform about misplaced laptop bag of black color. I left over the bag in hurry while getting down at my destination station. Firstly, I would like to mention some of the details of lost item; so that it could be verified easily. Laptop is of black color with a pink color cover. Bag consists of a HP laptop, charger and a book authored by J P Duminy.
Further adding my travelling information, which started on 25th of September 2019 from Patna to Bangalore and my ticket number and berth allowance is TUGFR5 and 27 respectively. I probably left it over while leaving the train on my seat.
So, I request you to send back pack to my office address via blue dart courier as it offers convenient and quick service. As laptop consist of several important files to be reported for work with dead line remaining of two weeks only. Therefore, please send it at earliest. Lastly, adding the office address; #36, 2nd floor, Blue ray building, M G road, Bangalore 560001.
Feel free to contact me on either 0987654321 or qwertyuio@qwert.com for any further information.
Thanking you
Yours faithfully,
ABC
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Dear Mr. Railway Master I am…
Dear Mr. Railway Master
I am writing to you for lodging a complaint, regarding loss of my wallet with valuable belongings.
I am Sheena Smith, and I am a regular railway traveler, who takes daily train between London to Watford for work.
Today morning when i boarded the train, my wallet was with me. After onboarding, I was working in parallel on my tablet, a fellow traveler pushed me inadvertently due to which i tripped on the train floor. In no time I organized myself and stood back. At regular time I disembarked the train.
While I took the cab to office later in the, and reached for my card which was in my wallet, I realized that the it was missing. This is a living nightmare! I have lost my identity proofs, my debit and credit cards, and 200 Pound cash too. The wallet was brown in color, and had SS (Initials of my Name) embossed on it, in golden color.
Please help to lodge a complaint, and help me find my valuables as soon as possible. I understand the railways has a functional lost and found department, please forward my complaint to that department as well, it may be an additional help. MY HP number is 1234567892, and my email is ssmith123@nowhere.com.
Looking forward to quick response. Kindly also text or message me if there is any additional step i need to take in recovering my belongings. if the wallet is found, I can arrange to collect the same.
Waiting for response from you, Sincerely,
Sheena
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir or Madam, I am writing this to inform about mispla...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ation. Firstly, I would like to mention some of the details of lost item; so that it could ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...ger and a book authored by J P Duminy. Further adding my travelling information, which...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.745 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78796969137 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.71 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1951514305 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0984732885705 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360274564212 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053341185809 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0335562649444 0.12726935374 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261030987681 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.