Some people believe that charity organizations should be help people wherever they live, others think they should attend their countries only.Discuss both ideas and give your opinion
In the modern era, an increasing concern for many people around the world is obviously the poverty.Despite of the wealthy countries there are a lot of different of poor countries and society.Furthermore, one part of volunteers which is leaving in the developed countries supporting to this people.However, the people divided to 2 different section about this idea.In this essay I will examine both side of arguments and provide will my overall opinion.
Generally speaking, each government have to be meet the requirements to their community.This basic requirements should be covered of accommodation, provide healthy system without charge, education and security. This definition is social government.Furthermore, just helping the certain group of people is not equal for humanity. Therefore, some developed countries, when reducing the their unhealthy conditions for people they be able to help other countries on the world. Some charity establishment is supporting to this idea. For example, in the Turkey government provide the equal life for Africa. Constantly, the people in the Thailand saving money for funding, collect to basic foods and second hand or new clothes and sending toward country. And also, secondly this establishment calling the people around the world such as a doctor, teacher.Within this individuals the people which in living the poor countries might be find the some vital assist.Furthermore, with this helping the each person could be learn the how they are lucky relevant to their life.If the the charity establishment has a power for helping inside and outside should be supporting this idea by governments.
Another view of opinion for this issue, some part of people believing to each establishment must be provide to help for their peoples. They claims this people becoming more and more lazy with this helps. For illustration, the people which suffering the poverty, we don’t have to help this people. Instead of this help we could be find the real solution.For examples, the country which has a lack of comestibles, they be to learn how to make agriculture.When they learning the improving the their themselves the volunteers must be assist to in the their countries. For illustration, the number of homeless people is increasing in the USA therefore first of all this associations should prevent to this situations. Secondly, for some student unable to graduate the school or maintain to university because of the lack of money. For example, In the London has a great education system but it is too much expensive. Thus, first the fundings using for the first this people educations.
In conclusion, I partially agree the both sides of arguments. However, obviously it’s not meaning to we shouldn’t stop the sending some basic affairs.Moreover, we can increase the education with other charity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2300.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29953917051 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23257354716 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481566820276 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 99.9457227699 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 121.052631579 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8421052632 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270496174424 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976712911791 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716278891299 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157653928004 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802264264111 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.