You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98.
The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
You should write at least 150 words.
The chart illustrated the amount of people and their travel destinations.Each purpose of visit and each destination showing separately.
First of all,according to the reason of visit highly number is belong to holiday.In between 1994 and 1998 holiday is came as a firts for the chart.It's approximately 110,000 people for 4 years.After holiday, business have secondly large of number in chart.And reasons of relatives and others just follow the line.However, still there is a huge amount of gap between poeple number of who choosen holiday and the rest of the others.And also, amount of total visits are increasing by years according to chart
Overall, as a destination gap is not less than between holiday and the others.Relevant to the chart most popular station is looks like Western Europe.Western Europe is never less than nearly 16000.After Western Europe, North America and Others Areas just come almost same numbers.Just in 1998 North America and Other Areas almost same as a popularity destinations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Each
...of people and their travel destinations.Each purpose of visit and each destination s...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , according
...tion showing separately. First of all,according to the reason of visit highly number is...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
...to the reason of visit highly number is belong to holiday.In between 1994 and 1998 hol...
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Suggestion: In
...isit highly number is belong to holiday.In between 1994 and 1998 holiday is came a...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...day.In between 1994 and 1998 holiday is came as a firts for the chart.Its approximat...
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Suggestion: Its
...oliday is came as a firts for the chart.Its approximately 110,000 people for 4 yea...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...oliday is came as a firts for the chart.Its approximately 110,000 people for 4 yea...
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Suggestion:
... a firts for the chart.Its approximately 110,000 people for 4 years.After holiday...
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Suggestion: After
...proximately 110,000 people for 4 years.After holiday, business have secondly large o...
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Suggestion: And
... have secondly large of number in chart.And reasons of relatives and others just fo...
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Suggestion: However
...latives and others just follow the line.However, still there is a huge amount of gap be...
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Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
... amount of gap between poeple number of who choosen holiday and the rest of the oth...
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Suggestion: And
...osen holiday and the rest of the others.And also, amount of total visits are increa...
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Suggestion: Relevant
...ess than between holiday and the others.Relevant to the chart most popular station is lo...
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Suggestion: Western
...ar station is looks like Western Europe.Western Europe is never less than nearly 16000....
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Suggestion: After
... Europe is never less than nearly 16000.After Western Europe, North America and Other...
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Suggestion: Just
...ers Areas just come almost same numbers.Just in 1998 North America and Other Areas a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, look, second, secondly, so, still, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3375 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11726542822 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 80.0 22.4926829268 356% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 369.0 43.030603864 858% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 427.0 112.824112599 378% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 80.0 22.9334400587 349% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 34.5 5.23603664747 659% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130281595442 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132305043996 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460932195477 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101777256601 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656757281511 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.7 13.2329268293 330% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.72 61.2550243902 -16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.5 10.3012195122 335% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.88 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.75 8.06136585366 146% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.4329268293 258% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.0 10.9970731707 309% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.0658536585 271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.