integraded tpo 33
The article states the key aspects that traditional campus environment programs are different from the online programs and provides three reasons to support. However, the professor explains that both the programs are similar and attacks each of the claims made in the reading.
In the reading, the author begins by stating that one-on-one with the professor is not possible in the online degree program. The lecturer, nevertheless, disagrees. he says that one-on-one is up to the student, if the student wants, then they do it through emails, chats and telephone conferences. Whereas, in traditional programs, this happens through face-to-face.
The writing also posits that online programs are not as challenging as on-campus programs. Again, the lecturer believes that there are flaws in the writer's argument. he argues that online-programs are indeed difficult, needs a lot of concentration and strong time management skills. he goes on and says that there are many online programs weigh up to 20 credits.
Another reason why the author feels that two programs are different is that top schools do not offer online degree programs but, the professor in the listening passage is doubtful that this is accurate. he asserts that every ivy league schools provide online programs, only a few require a one-time residency requirement. Even Princeton has started online programs to its students.
To sum up, both the author and the professor have conflicting views and they will have trouble finding common ground on this issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
... The lecturer, nevertheless, disagrees. he says that one-on-one is up to the stude...
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Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
...er believes that there are flaws in the writers argument. he argues that online-program...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...here are flaws in the writers argument. he argues that online-programs are indeed ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...tion and strong time management skills. he goes on and says that there are many on...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...sage is doubtful that this is accurate. he asserts that every ivy league schools p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, whereas, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 242.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35950413223 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78968469313 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 145.348785872 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582644628099 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5031963362 49.2860985944 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6428571429 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06452816374 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0599088905522 0.272083759551 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0217346287711 0.0996497079465 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301875685853 0.0662205650399 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0433921568418 0.162205337803 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398011253736 0.0443174109184 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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